This article is about the University of Kansas Basketball Team and how they are asking for possible additions to the practice squad involving a Tight End from the KU football team because of an incident with Freshman forward Billy Preston.
Sophomore James Sosinski, who transferred from UMass in 2015 after signing with them, then transferred to Stone Mountain CC to play basketball last year, played this fall for the Jayhawk Football team as he has ended up at 3 schools in 3 consecutive years.
What the article did well was add the information about Sosinski and the past colleges he has attended and that he has played both football. Also, adding in information that was commented from coach Bill Self, it provided interesting possibilities of an addition to the team, but it is not official.
What the reporter needs to improve on is maybe adding information on where he originally committed to and for what sport because it talks about he was in many different sports.
What I will add in my work is to be more specific on details that must be addressed.
http://www.espn.com/mens-college-basketball/story/_/id/21612417/kansas-coach-bill-self-turns-football-player-help-shorthanded-squad-billy-preston-sidelined
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