Thursday, December 7, 2017

Weekly Blog 12/8

This article about the youngest two Ball brothers and how they signed an agent and now are headed overseas to play basketball.

What the reporter,  Jeff Goodman, implied to his article that was well done was he added all the information from the previous week, and lead with the topic of the headline to have the story flow more smoothly. What he also did well was not put in the same quotes from Lavar Ball like a lot of other sites have done.

What Jeff Goodman could have done better is include or at least mention the LiAngelo situation as he forgot to include why they are playing overseas in the first place. Overall, it was a well-written article.

The information that I could include into my work is to get many sources as possible to get other views on situations like this. It also helps choose a different variety and makes it more options to pick from. Also I can also conclude that sources will be accurate in order to provide accurate information.





http://www.espn.com/mens-college-basketball/story/_/id/21701171/lavar-ball-sons-liangelo-lamelo-sign-agent-harrison-gaines

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